This is my advertising poster after I have had feedback from my tutor. I have changed my ideas around to make the poster look more professional. I have taken away the images of the album and cut out part of the cover and placed it to the side of the poster. I have also changed the font of the text to make it more easier to read. Instead of having just th HMV logo, I have placed logos of popular companies who sell music videos and music so it looks more professional. It is showing that the video and the song is available from these places. I have also changed the stars underneath the quote. I wanted to make them stand out so I placed a thin white border around them.